The teacher asks Ana to revise her conclusion because it states a new fact instead of summing up her essay. Ana really wants to include the fact. What can she do?

Question

A. Rewrite the paper from scratch.
B. Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.
C. Turn the paper in again with no changes.
D. Write a longer conclusion, and start with the new fact.

Answer 1

B. Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.

This option allows Ana to incorporate the new fact into her essay in a way that enhances her argument and keeps the conclusion focused on summarizing her main points.