The teacher asks Ana to revise her conclusion because it states a new fact instead of summing up her essay. Ana really wants to include the fact. What can she do?

Question

1. Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.
2. Write a longer conclusion, and start with the new fact
3. Turn the paper in again with no changes
4. Rewrite the paper from scratch

Answer 1

1. Add the fact to a body paragraph, then update the conclusion if needed.

By adding the fact to a relevant body paragraph, Ana can ensure that it is still included in her essay without disrupting the purpose of the conclusion. After doing so, she can revise her conclusion by focusing on summarizing the main points and arguments discussed in her essay.