Yes, fluency.
Fluency is constantly interrupted by the repetition of "the store" -- plus, each sentence seems to be a separate topic of its own.
The store will stay open later during the holiday season. The store will stock a variety of seasonal merchandise.
The store will have many discounts available for holiday shoppers.
22. When revising the paragraph above, the writer should address which of the following?
A. Sentence fluency
B. Punctuation
C. Paragraph organization
D. Writing clarity
I think its A because the sentences are not really flowing from one to another. Is this correct?
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