"The said activity is very essential to improve the relationship of this office with our counterparts and becomes more efficient in accomplishing our duties and responsibilities"

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"The said activity is very essential to improve the relationship of this Office with our counterparts and become more efficient in accomplishing our duties and responsibilities"

Answer 1

"The said activity is very essential to improve the relationship of this office with our counterparts and become more efficient in accomplishing our duties and responsibilities."