The recipients of the Carter Foundation Scholarship are determined by academic excellence and considering a student's financial need.

What is the best way to write the underlined part of the sentence?
A.
by a student's financial need
B.
Leave as is
C.
to consider a student's financial need
D.
considering financial need, of students

1 answer

The best way to write the underlined part of the sentence is:
A. by a student's financial need
This correction maintains parallel structure with "academic excellence" and simplifies the phrasing.