The pronoun antecedents are unclear in the following sentences. Underline the pronouns in each, then rewrite the sentences so the antecedent is clear.
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1. I really like reading mystery novels, but I like reading non-fiction books too. I enjoy reading them all the time.
2. He wanted to cut the lawn, wash his car, and reive to Windsor that weekend. This was unrealistic.
PS. I don't get the underline part. What does it want me to underline. The part I'm changing?
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I will post my answers below.
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1. I really......non-fiction books too. I enjoy reading them.
Didn't really change anything much. Is this how I do it? Is it correct?
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2. He wanted to.....that weekend. Those activities were unrealistic.
Is it correct?
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Help is greatly appreciated. Since english is my second language it's hard for me.
Thanks,
4 answers
1. I really like reading mystery novels, but I like reading non-fiction books too. I enjoy reading them all the time.
Rewritten: I really like reading mystery novels and non-fiction books, too. [No need for the second sentence; it's redundant!]
How will you fix #2?
2. There are no pronouns in the sentence. Perhaps they want to to clarify what the antecedent of "this" is
2. "This was unrealistic" to "These activities were unrealistic"
Please respond.