“The Prickly Cacti”
The prickly plant stands,
Tall and strong in the desert,
In the arid land.
Is this a valid haiku?
6 answers
-And should I change anything?
Be sure to separate the title. Otherwise, it seems like a 4-line poem, which is not haiku.
The syllable counts are right. Here's more detail if you need it:
https://poets.org/glossary/haiku
The syllable counts are right. Here's more detail if you need it:
https://poets.org/glossary/haiku
Yes, of course I'll separate the title, and thanks. Do I need to change the wording.
I don't think you need to change anything.
Okay, thanks!
You're welcome!