The Okefenokee is the biggest swamp in North America. Part of it was helped by Franklin Roosevelt when he took a bunch of it and made it into a wildlife refuge. Before that, people could take trees away. Now the swamp has loads of animals.

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The Okefenokee Swamp boasts the distinction of being the largest swamp in North America. Notably, a significant portion of this vast wetland was designated as a wildlife refuge through the initiatives of Franklin Roosevelt. Prior to its protection, the swamp faced the removal of trees by individuals. Consequently, the refuge is now teeming with diverse wildlife populations.