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The King of the Jungle

(1) Finally, the day had dawned when Joe and I might spot the king of beasts! (2) We were thrilled beyond belief. (3) After all, this was the first time we were doing something of this kind. (4) Following our friend Ronald's advice, we had sought Milo's help. (5) Milo was a local tribesman and no visitor had ever returned disappointed with Milo. (6) Although Milo was busy as usual, he agreed to accompany us. (7) He was very possessive about the jungle and its animals. (8) Joe and I met Milo half a mile before the forest began and we got into a jeep. (9) As we drove toward the forest, the uneven stretch of road became narrower, and the ride got bumpy and uncomfortable. (10) As we approached the beginning of the forest, Joe and I were filled with excitement and nervous anticipation. (11) The path was covered with a thick carpet of creepers, plants, and fallen leaves, while the tall trees formed a green roof overhead. (12) "This is so beautiful and I'm so glad we came here!" exclaimed Joe. (13) Although Milo could not figure out what we were saying, the look of sheer awe and wonder on our faces were enough to tell him that we were spellbound and happy.
(14) As we crossed a stream, we saw elephants and their calves bathing and playing in the water. (15) Above, monkeys were swinging from the branches and leaping from tree to tree. (16) Milo frowned at Joe when he saw him clicking pictures. (17) We understood that he didn't like people taking pictures of the animals. (18) Driving farther inside, we saw stags and deer leaping and running about. (19) Suddenly, Milo placed a finger on his lips and gestured to us to remain quiet as we were about to enter the territory of the king of the jungle. (20) Obeying our guide's instructions, we did not move an inch and waited with bated breath to catch a glimpse of the King. (21) After a few moments, Milo turned to us excitedly and pointed his finger at a thicket. (22) We peered out of the window and saw a huge lion resting behind the thicket. (23) We could barely breathe! (24) We were completely awestruck by the sight of the lion caressing his cubs. (25) Using my binoculars, I watched him for quite some time. (26) Observing his golden skin, powerful piercing eyes, long silky mane and commanding stride, I could understand why the lion is called the king of the jungle.

Read the sentence from the passage.

The path was covered with a thick carpet of creepers, plants, and fallen leaves, while the tall trees formed a green roof overhead.

Why does the author use passive voice in this sentence?
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to show that the narrator and Joe were excited and awestruck
to explain why the path was so long and tiring
to let the readers know how the narrator and Joe felt
to help readers imagine how the path looked
Which sentence contains an inappropriate shift in mood?
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He went fishing every day but returned empty-handed.
If I wanted to watch the movie, I would have bought the tickets quickly.
I might be able to watch television tonight if I complete all my chores.
Go to the public library, and then you might find the book if it is there.
The "Narrow" Escape

Riley stood in nervous anticipation at the corner of Waller and Mason. Riley had always walked to school with her neighbor Ian. However, Ian was sick with the flu and couldn't walk with her. Now, Riley had to face the block with the giant ferocious dog on her own. What did Ian always say? Riley thought hard. You need to check for tree branches on the ground, and do not make any noise.
When Riley neared the house with the monster of a dog, she slowed her pace. She tiptoed up the sidewalk, hoping that she could quietly sneak by the beast. However, all her carefulness was undone in a single step. She stepped on a branch that broke with a deafening crack, and the silence was broken. Riley yelled, "Don't bother me, and you should stay where you are!" Then, she broke into a sprint. Meanwhile, the old dog sleepily opened his beady eyes and scanned the surrounding yard before dozing off again.
Read the following sentence from the passage.

You need to check for tree branches on the ground, and do not make any noise.

Identify the inappropriate shift or inconsistency of verb mood in the sentence.
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from imperative to indicative
from indicative to imperative
from subjunctive to imperative
from indicative to subjunctive
The "Narrow" Escape

Riley stood in nervous anticipation at the corner of Waller and Mason. Riley had always walked to school with her neighbor Ian. However, Ian was sick with the flu and couldn't walk with her. Now, Riley had to face the block with the giant ferocious dog on her own. What did Ian always say? Riley thought hard. You need to check for tree branches on the ground, and do not make any noise.
When Riley neared the house with the monster of a dog, she slowed her pace. She tiptoed up the sidewalk, hoping that she could quietly sneak by the beast. However, all her carefulness was undone in a single step. She stepped on a branch that broke with a deafening crack, and the silence was broken. Riley yelled, "Don't bother me, and you should stay where you are!" Then, she broke into a sprint. Meanwhile, the old dog sleepily opened his beady eyes and scanned the surrounding yard before dozing off again.
Read the following sentence from the passage.

Riley yelled, "Don't bother me, and you should stay where you are!"

Which of the following corrects the inappropriate shift in mood in the sentence above?
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Riley yelled, "You should not bother me, and stay where you are!"
Riley yelled, "If you bother me, you should stay where you are!"
Riley yelled, "Don't bother me, and stay where you are!"
Riley yelled, "Don't bother me if you stay where you are!"
Which sentence is written in the passive voice?
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The dogs chased the stray cat for hours on end.
The city council got the roads repaired before the rains.
Riley made pancakes for his sister by reading the recipe in a cookbook.
The soccer practice was cancelled because of the unexpected rains.
What is the best way to change this sentence from passive voice to active voice?

The entire barn was moved across the field by the strong winds.
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The entire barn across the field was moved by the strong winds.
Across the field, the entire barn was moved by the strong winds.
The strong winds moved the entire barn across the field.
Moved across the field, the entire barn was by the strong winds.
Which statement is written in passive voice?
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The firefighters fought bravely against the wildfires in the forest.
The acrobats at the circus brought joy to the children in the crowd.
The town hall was filled by the concerned citizens of the area.
The teacher inspired her students to be the best they could be.
What is the best way to change this sentence from active voice to passive voice?

You need to pack the supplies, the food, and the first aid kit before the camping trip.
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The supplies, the food, and the first aid kit all need to be packed before the camping trip.
You probably should pack the supplies, the food, and the first aid kit before the camping trip.
Someone needs to pack the supplies, the food, and the first aid kit before the camping trip.
Before the camping trip, you need to pack the supplies, the food, and the first aid kit.
Which sentence is written in active voice?
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First prize at the science fair was presented by the mayor.
The scientists discovered a new way to fight the common cold.
The famous ice cream shop was owned by Angel's grandfather.
The best essay was written by the newest student in class.
What is the best way to change this sentence from passive voice to active voice?

The audience was moved to tears by the beautiful voices of the choir.
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Of the choir, the audience was moved to tears by the beautiful voices.
To tears, the audience was moved by the beautiful voices of the choir.
The tears of the audience were moved by the beautiful voices of the choir.
The beautiful voices of the choir moved the audi

1 answer

Here are the answers to your questions:

  1. Why does the author use passive voice in this sentence?

    • to help readers imagine how the path looked.

  2. Which sentence contains an inappropriate shift in mood?

    • If I wanted to watch the movie, I would have bought the tickets quickly.

  3. Identify the inappropriate shift or inconsistency of verb mood in the sentence.

    • from indicative to imperative.

  4. Which of the following corrects the inappropriate shift in mood in the sentence above?

    • Riley yelled, "Don't bother me, and stay where you are!"

  5. Which sentence is written in the passive voice?

    • The soccer practice was cancelled because of the unexpected rains.

  6. What is the best way to change this sentence from passive voice to active voice?

    • The strong winds moved the entire barn across the field.

  7. Which statement is written in passive voice?

    • The town hall was filled by the concerned citizens of the area.

  8. What is the best way to change this sentence from active voice to passive voice?

    • The supplies, the food, and the first aid kit all need to be packed before the camping trip.

  9. Which sentence is written in active voice?

    • The scientists discovered a new way to fight the common cold.

  10. What is the best way to change this sentence from passive voice to active voice?

    • The beautiful voices of the choir moved the audience to tears.

If you have any more questions or need further clarification, feel free to ask!