A better thesis statement could be: "Despite some skepticism about its significance, renewable energy is crucial for a sustainable future." This revision presents a clear stance while acknowledging opposing views, making it more compelling and focused for an academic essay.
The following is an excerpt from a student’s essay on renewable energy for her science class. Read the excerpt and complete the task that follows: ( I believe renewable energy is very important) Which of the following revisions to the underlined sentence would be the Best thesis statement? (Although some believe renewable energy is not important, I believe it is.)
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