The creature sat upright and tugged at the shackles binding his ankles, Frakenstein uttered a piercing scream
I'm not sure what you are asking here, but if it's about the construction or any errors in what you've typed in, here goes:
That is not a grammatically correct sentence. It is a run-on (comma splice), and it needs to be correctly punctuated as two sentences.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
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