The conclusion to Doug's essay on the importance of arts education in schools reads, "While not every student will grow up to become an artist, 1.4% of working Americans are artists." Which rewrite would improve his conclusion?(1 point)

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No improvement is needed.
No improvement is needed.

While not every student will grow up to become an artist, making and appreciating art can enrich every life.
While not every student will grow up to become an artist, making and appreciating art can enrich every life.

We teach health even though only 0.7% of working Americans are doctors, yet 1.4% of working Americans are artists.
We teach health even though only 0.7% of working Americans are doctors, yet 1.4% of working Americans are artists.

Artists are very important, and we should encourage more of them.

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While not every student will grow up to become an artist, making and appreciating art can enrich every life.