In conclusion, Bozzone's exploration of how our perceived imperfections shape our abilities encourages readers to appreciate their unique qualities. By highlighting examples of successful athletes like Michael Phelps and Simone Biles, she shows that being different can lead to great achievements. Ultimately, this message helps us embrace our own "imperfect" bodies and recognize the strengths they bring to our lives.
The author's text structure in this paragraph is cause and effect. I know this because the author explained what our ancestors did. For example, she said they ate harder foods and got larger jaws. Bozzone’s choice of cause and effect helped me as a reader notice how people are perfect for one thing or another. Also, one text feature I noticed was illustrations. This feature was helpful because it helped me imagine who the person was or what she was talking about.
The author’s purpose of this text was to inform.
Bozzone explains how everyone is perfect. We may have a few imperfections, but all of our odd parts and comprises build up from our ancestors. Also, the author believes physical flaws don’t exist. She believes that human flaws have helped people like Michael Phelps, who has earned 28 Olympic medals, Simone Biles, who is the top gymnast of all time, and Usain Bolt, who has 3 world records for being the fastest sprinter. Understanding the author’s point of view helped me to understand the topic better. Before reading, we would probably have agreed that the example had all the right proportions. However, after reading, we discovered that Michael, Simone, and Usain do not fit that standard. Their body type perfectly suits the activity they excel at.
Bozzone distinguishes her position from others by using DaVinci’s vision of a perfect body. The author uses the example of Michael Phelps to show his feet could be used as flippers when he swims. Plus, He has double joints in his ankle, which makes his body extremely flexible. Another example the author uses is Simone Biles, who had a small but strong body. She could also sense better than average ability for where her body is in space, making jumps, spins, and somersaults easier for her.
Understanding how the author shows that an “imperfect” body could be a good thing helps to understand that we can use our insecurities (or imperfect bodies) to see how it’s a good thing.
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