the achievevment I have outlined for Luther is : that he was the !st one to begin a reformation. He drew list of arguements against church practises and nailed them to door of church in German city of Wittenberg. The list which became known as Luther's Ninety-five Theses, was copied printed & distributed throughout Europe.

Question

Again If u can try to make this shorter than please do and I believe I have missed something important out, then please do add to it. Thanx

Answer 1

If I have added some nonimportant things in it then please do take them out

Answer 2

You don't want to make it any shorter. You have covered Luther's main achievements. Now, please proofread it to correct the misspellings and typos.

Answer 3

oh sorry i'm just a bad typer not a bad speller

Answer 4

I hope you wouldn't turn in a paper with these typos. Your paper shouldn't start with
"that he was the first one . . ."

Be sure to put Luther's full name somewhere in the first sentence.

Answer 5

okay but overall is it gud?

Answer 6

You have the important information, but I can't say it's good until I see your final paragraph -- the way you plan to turn it in to your teacher.

Answer 7

Luther was the first one to begin the reformation. He drew a list of arguements against church practises and nailed them to the door of the church in German city of Wittenberg. The list which became known as Luther's Ninety-five Theses, was copied printed & distributed throughout Europe.

Answer 8

Yay! You've done a very good job!!

Only a few minor corrections:

Reformation should be capitalized.

arguments (spelling)

the German . . .

and (not &)