3. If you want to add what's in parentheses in the correction part, then delete "and" before "encouraged" and put commas after "power" and "ships"
4. Your correction is good.
Thank you. How would you check sentences
numer 3 and 4. I'm not sure about my corrections
Just two things on my previous post.
1)"as long as Dunsinane hill doesn't move towards him " is better than "until Dunsinane hill moves towards him"?
2) Women weren't allowed to act so men had to play also female roles.
Is the position of "also" correct?
Elizabeth was "the" queen of a divided nation OR was queen of a divided nation?
3) She made England a commercial and seafaring power and encouraged the piracy against the Spanish ships for increase the wealth of England.
Correction: She made .... encouraged piracy against captured Spanish ships (and took a share of the profits).
4) She also fought with the Spanish Invincible Armada and defeated them thanks to the English ships that were faster and lower than the Spanish ships and armed with long-range guns.
Correction: The English ships prevailed over the Spanish ones because they were faster, lower and ........
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