Thank you for your help
2. Look at the last picture. He is wearing a helmet,is sweating, and is holding a big book. I am not sure whether it is a blue print or a big workbook. As he is an engineer, he seems to write something on the big workbook to do his construction work. Write down Mi-na's father on the line/ in the blank under the picture.
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Writeacher, according to your suggestion, I posted the better version. Check them,please.
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Blueprint in one word when refering to engineering drawings. You could eliminate the "is" before "sweating", but it's OK as is.
DrWLS is correct -- use "blueprint" (one word).
You should also write "The man" instead of the first instance of "He" because you need a noun for the other uses of "he" to refer to.
Nice job.
You should also write "The man" instead of the first instance of "He" because you need a noun for the other uses of "he" to refer to.
Nice job.
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