The type of source used in this sentence is Secondary.
Tennis great Andre Agassi will retire at the end of the year, ESPN reported on its Web site Thursday.
Which type of source is used in this sentence?
(1 point)
Responses
Primary
Primary
Official
Official
Secondary
Secondary
Authentic
Authentic
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Look up above, at the night sky
Stars twinkling, moon shining so bright
It’s beamy glow, covering across the meadows
The wispy winds, almost sounds like an echo
Stars twinkling, moon shining so bright
It’s beamy glow, covering across the meadows
The wispy winds, almost sounds like an echo
What a lovely start to a poem! It beautifully captures the serene and magical essence of a night sky. Would you like to continue writing or receive feedback on it?
Rate it so far 1-10. It’s only the beginning part
I’d rate it a 7 out of 10! It has a nice imagery and captures the peacefulness of a night scene. The use of descriptive language like "twinkling stars" and "beamy glow" creates a vivid picture. You might consider refining the rhythm and flow a bit more in future lines to enhance the musicality of the poem. Keep going—I'm excited to see how it develops!
Alright which line ur talking about
I was referring to the overall flow of the poem. Here's a breakdown of some specific lines where the rhythm could be refined for better musicality:
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"It’s beamy glow, covering across the meadows" - The phrase “covering across” feels a bit awkward; you might consider rephrasing it to something like "its beaming glow covering the meadows" to maintain a smoother rhythm.
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"The wispy winds, almost sounds like an echo" - This line could also be more fluid; perhaps "The wispy winds almost sound like an echo" would have a more consistent flow.
When you read it aloud, focus on the natural cadence of the words. Making small adjustments can help enhance the overall musicality of the piece. Overall, you’ve set a lovely tone, and I'm eager to see how it continues!
Ah how does it sound awkward
The line "It’s beamy glow, covering across the meadows" feels slightly awkward mainly due to the phrasing. Here's a closer look:
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"It’s beamy glow" - The word "beamy" is unconventional and may catch the reader off guard. Using "its glowing beam" or "its beaming light" could sound more natural.
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"covering across the meadows" - The phrase "covering across" can seem redundant or confusing. Typically, we use "covering" alone, or you might say "spreading across".
Together these choices affect the overall rhythm and natural flow of the line, making it feel a bit choppy.
When you read it aloud, you might notice that it doesn't roll off the tongue as smoothly as it could. Adjusting those phrases can lead to a more polished and fluid line. That said, poetry is subjective, and if it feels right to you, that’s what matters most! Would you like help rephrasing it?
Ah sorry
No need to apologize! Poetry is a personal expression, and discussing it can help refine your ideas or inspire new ones. Your initial lines are quite evocative, and exploring ways to enhance them is part of the creative process. If you’d like, I can help brainstorm some alternatives or continue developing the poem. Just let me know!
Well thanks for making me feel bad. And lowering my self esteem.
I’m truly sorry if my feedback made you feel that way—that was not my intention at all. Creating poetry can be a vulnerable experience, and every piece of writing has value. Your lines evoke beautiful imagery, and I appreciate the effort you put into them. If you’d like support or want to talk about any specific ideas or themes in your poem, I’m here to help you in a positive way.
No no no I’m dropping the poem. Thanks for your time. Cya tomorrow it’s 9:23 pm and I have to go to bed soon
I completely understand, and I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling this way. Please remember that the creative process can have its ups and downs, and it's okay to take a break. Thank you for sharing your work with me!
I hope you have a restful night, and I'm here whenever you want to chat again. Take care!