Students who do their homework on a regular basis have grades higher than students who don’t do homework. When students do not do their homework they fall behind in the class and eventually receive a zero on that paper, this results in dropping their grade for that class. By doing homework every day it shows the instruction that you are trying your best to learn in that class. Homework counts for 15% of your overall average, am pretty sure no one can afford to lose that by not doing your homework. By doing homework it keeps you up to date with what you are studying at that time. A recent studied showed that students that did homework where more likely to average a B average than students who did not do home work. 1. Highlight any words that have been used incorrectly. Type the correct word after the incorrect word.
2. Change each verb to a more vivid, descriptive verb. You may not leave any of the verbs the same as your initial assignment submission.
3. Highlight each comma, label it as used correctly or used incorrectly, and then explain why it is either correct or incorrect.
can some check my paper to see if I got it correct
6 answers
Where are your corrections?
On the paper I posted it does not show on here where I highlighted but it shows on my final paper.
Run-on sentences:
When students do not do their homework they fall behind in the class and eventually receive a zero on that paper, this results in dropping their grade for that class.
Homework counts for 15% of your overall average, am pretty sure no one can afford to lose that by not doing your homework.
Wrong words:
instruction
studied
that
where
Indefinite pronoun reference. Reword this sentence.
By doing homework it keeps you up to date with what you are studying at that time.
Redundant:
to average a B average
When students do not do their homework they fall behind in the class and eventually receive a zero on that paper, this results in dropping their grade for that class.
Homework counts for 15% of your overall average, am pretty sure no one can afford to lose that by not doing your homework.
Wrong words:
instruction
studied
that
where
Indefinite pronoun reference. Reword this sentence.
By doing homework it keeps you up to date with what you are studying at that time.
Redundant:
to average a B average
can you tell me if the commas are used correctly or incorrectly and why they are correct or incorrect
Also om the verbs I have to use new more vivid ,descriptive verbs so when i use the sentence students who do their homework should I change it to students who complete their homework....
Comma errors in these sentences:
When students do not do their homework they fall behind in the class and eventually receive a zero on that paper, this results in dropping their grade for that class. 2 errors in here
By doing homework every day it shows the instruction that you are trying your best to learn in that class. 1 comma error and one pronoun-reference error
Homework counts for 15% of your overall average, am pretty sure no one can afford to lose that by not doing your homework. 1 comma error; POV errors; missing a subject
By doing homework it keeps you up to date with what you are studying at that time. overall bad sentence! Ms. Sue noted it above.
A recent studied showed that students that did homework where more likely to average a B average than students who did not do home work. word-choice errors; no commas needed
When students do not do their homework they fall behind in the class and eventually receive a zero on that paper, this results in dropping their grade for that class. 2 errors in here
By doing homework every day it shows the instruction that you are trying your best to learn in that class. 1 comma error and one pronoun-reference error
Homework counts for 15% of your overall average, am pretty sure no one can afford to lose that by not doing your homework. 1 comma error; POV errors; missing a subject
By doing homework it keeps you up to date with what you are studying at that time. overall bad sentence! Ms. Sue noted it above.
A recent studied showed that students that did homework where more likely to average a B average than students who did not do home work. word-choice errors; no commas needed