Step 1: Character and Setting (Exposition)

Who is your main character?
Name: Alaysia
Age:12
What do they look like? Brown hair with freckles and long lashes
Are there any other key characters in your story?

Name(s): ciana
Age:18
What do they look like? Black curly hair and amazing facial features
Where does your story take place?
Describe the location(s): Inside a Cheerleading gym located in south america
Sensory Language:loud
Figurative Language: “her yelling hit me like a ton of bricks”
What time period is it set in (past, present, future)? Present
What is unusual about your main character?
(Hint: How are they different from who they seem to be?)
The main character has been cheering for 12 years and they are extremely good at it and make it look so easy but in reality its a huge struggle. And its hard always having people look up to you and everyone having such high expectations for you.

Step 2: Establish the Problem (Rising Action)
What is the main problem or conflict in the story?
(Hint: Does someone discover your character’s secret? What challenges do they face?)
Alaysia, the main character has a deep dark secret that nobody else knows about, her mom s the cheer coach and her friend ciana found out about it.
What events happen to build suspense or show the problem getting worse?
1. The team wonders why she always goes home with the coach but she says she is just getting a ride home
2. Ciana wonders how they look just alike
3.The team cant figure out why alaysia is always getting yelled at by the coach.

Step 3: The Climax (Turning Point)
What is the most exciting or dramatic moment of your story?
(Hint: This is when the character’s secret might be revealed or something big happens!)
Alaysia finally breaks down crying to her friend ciana and starts saying how cheerleading is not so easy seeming her mom is the coach
Ciana felt betrayed by alaysia because alaysia has been lying to her the whole time and never told her the truth

Step 4: The Solution (Falling Action)
What happens right after the climax?
(Hint: How does your character deal with the situation?)

Step 5: The Ending (Resolution)
How does the story end?
Does the character’s secret stay hidden, or is it revealed?
How do the other characters react?
MAke this into a narrative text story with everything I have given you

1 answer

Title: Behind the Pom-Poms

Alaysia sat cross-legged on the mat of the cheerleading gym, surrounded by the chatter and laughter of her teammates. The sound, although loud and energetic, felt distant as she traced the patterns of her freckles on her arm. At twelve years old, Alaysia had been cheering for as long as she could remember. With her brown hair cascading down her back and long lashes that framed her wide brown eyes, she seemed like the perfect cheerleader—effortlessly gliding through routines that left others in awe. But beneath her bright smile lay a struggle that she had kept secret for too long.

Ciana, one of the older girls on the team, had an aura of charisma. At eighteen, her black, curly hair framed her delicate facial features, giving her an almost enchanting look. She was not only Alaysia’s friend but also her confidante—though little did she know, secrets often lingered in the spaces between them.

The cheerleading gym was situated in the bustling heart of South America, thrumming with energy and anticipation. The echoes of shouted encouragement and the rhythmic sounds of feet pounding against the mat filled the air, constructing a vibrant atmosphere where dreams of glittering competitions and dazzling performances took flight. Yet, behind the curtains of cheer and camaraderie, Alaysia's reality was a stark contrast.

While she excelled at cheerleading, she felt an unbearable weight pressing down on her. Her mom, the coach, scrutinized her every move with an intensity that made Alaysia’s heart race in dread. Everyone marveled at her grace, but they had no idea of the fears she battled every day. The expectations placed upon her felt like an unrelenting storm, and her facade began to crack—a reality only known to Alaysia.

As weeks passed, whispers began to circulate within the team. “Why does Alaysia always go home with Coach?” one teammate wondered, eyes narrowing with curiosity. "She must just be getting a ride," another replied dismissively. Yet, Ciana’s keen eyes had begun to connect dots that the others ignored. “Why do they look so much alike?” Ciana pondered, her mind racing with suspicions. There was a profound mystery in Alaysia’s relationship with the coach, and the uncertainty brewed like dark clouds on the horizon.

The tension increased every practice as Alaysia faced Ciana’s watchful gaze. Every lunge and routine seemed to amplify the underlying tension. Alaysia felt the weight of countless eyes bearing down on her, especially when yelling filled the air. “Her yelling hit me like a ton of bricks,” Alaysia thought, hoping against hope that none of her teammates would see through her forced smile.

One fateful afternoon, the situation escalated. Ciana had pushed for a better understanding of what was happening, pulling Alaysia aside after practice. "Why are you always getting yelled at? There must be something you’re not telling me,” Ciana pressed gently, her voice laced with concern.

In that moment, the dam broke. Alaysia’s composure shattered, and she found herself crying in front of Ciana, the rush of emotions pouring from her like a waterfall. “Cheerleading isn’t as easy as it looks! It’s hard with my mom as the coach. She expects so much from me, and sometimes I want to quit,” Alaysia admitted through her sobs.

Ciana’s expression shifted from concern to betrayal as she processed the revelation. “You’ve been lying to me, Alaysia! This…this changes everything,” she said, stepping back as if the truth had pushed her physically away. The rift between them formed almost instantaneously, widening with each word unspoken.

In the aftermath of the climax, Alaysia found herself grappling with the fear of losing her friend while also struggling to confront her reality. Ciana needed time to process, and Alaysia, filled with regret, promised herself that she would be honest moving forward. Day after day, she showed up to practice, facing her fears head-on, and slowly began to open up to her teammates about the struggles she had kept hidden. To her surprise, Alaysia discovered that many shared similar fears and pressures, forming a bond through vulnerability.

By the end of the season, everything changed. Alaysia stood beside Ciana, her cheeks still glistening with remnants of tears but now filled with determination. Secrets no longer twisted like thorns in her heart; instead, they had transformed into support and acceptance among friends. Ciana, now firmly by her side, had forgiven and understood, which mended the tear in their friendship.

As they prepared for the upcoming competition, Alaysia no longer felt like a facade or a perfect cheerleader. Instead, she embraced her true self, flaws and all, reshaping the expectations she felt burdened by. The truth of her struggles had come to light, illuminating the path forward, allowing her to cheer not only for herself but for everyone around her. They were a team, after all—united through the complexities of life, behind the pom-poms.

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