Sonny was tall with dark hair and brown eyes. He held a baseball bat up against his shoulder.

Question

Which additional description would best help develop the character?

(1 point)
Responses

Sonny’s focused practice swings made harsh whooshing sounds that caused nearby players to cast sideways glances at him, clearly impressed.
Sonny’s focused practice swings made harsh whooshing sounds that caused nearby players to cast sideways glances at him, clearly impressed.

Sonny wore a red baseball shirt and gray pants. He also wore cleats and carried a baseball bag like everyone else. Everyone was at the field for tryouts.
Sonny wore a red baseball shirt and gray pants. He also wore cleats and carried a baseball bag like everyone else. Everyone was at the field for tryouts.

Sonny was very talented. He was probably much better than most of the other players who came for tryouts.
Sonny was very talented. He was probably much better than most of the other players who came for tryouts.

Sonny’s team had tryouts every year. Tryouts were always a big deal, so it was no surprise the field was so full.

Answer 1

The description that would best help develop the character is:

"Sonny’s focused practice swings made harsh whooshing sounds that caused nearby players to cast sideways glances at him, clearly impressed."

This option not only illustrates Sonny's skill and dedication but also provides insight into how he is perceived by others, adding depth to his character and the scene.