Sofia is writing a piece of media to read during the morning announcements at her school. She wants to convince her classmates to donate baked goods for the school’s annual bake sale, and to help run the bake sale. There is a popular sports event taking place at the same time as the bake sale that students are likely to want to attend.

In 3–5 sentences, explain how Sofia can create the most effective announcement in favor of working the bake sale. Include at least one piece of information Sofia should convey and why she should include it. Also include at least one piece of information Sofia should exclude from her announcement and explain why she should exclude it.

(4 points)

Short Answer Rubric (4 points)
Points Awarded Criteria
4
The answer is very clear.

The answer is fully supported by details.

There may be a few errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. Errors do not interfere with meaning.

3
The answer is mostly clear.

The answer is supported by mostly relevant details.

There are a few errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. Errors do not interfere with meaning.

2
The answer is somewhat clear.

Details are weak or not related.

There are some errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. Errors interfere with meaning.

1
The answer is not clear.

There are few or no supporting details.

There are many errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. Errors interfere with meaning.

0 The question is not answered.

1 answer

To create an effective announcement, Sofia should highlight the impact that the bake sale has on her school, such as funding for clubs or activities that her classmates care about. This incentive can motivate students to donate baked goods and volunteer their time, showing how their participation directly benefits them. She should also emphasize the fun atmosphere of the bake sale, creating a contrast to competing with the sports event, suggesting it’s a great opportunity to socialize and support their school. Conversely, she should avoid mentioning the details of the sports event itself, as this might distract students from focusing on the bake sale and could diminish their enthusiasm for participating.