So I have to write an essay how do i rate canada when compared to the rest of the world. On the sheet it shows you a set up on how to write it
Introductory Sentence/ Thesis -In my opinion, canada is favourable compared to the rest of the world.
Supporting Evidence - Canada rates one of the highest based on the life expectancy.
Importance of this evidence - ?
I don't know what the importance of the evidence I provided. I don't know what to say.
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A high life expectancy means the citizens live healthy lives and have access to good medical care. Long lives are good for all of us.
So I would say ; Continents like Africa has lessened lives due to poor medical care and services compared to Canada ? I don't know if it was connected to the importance of the evidence.
I wouldn't compare the country of Canada with a continent like Africa. You might mention a few other countries, though, that contrast with Canada.
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