So do you mean that I should just fix my grammar and i have covered all the points i needed to . and yes her name is pyne not payne sorry.
I don't think you have clearly addressed (2) in your assignment. Is Pyne identified with a particular Oriental culture? If so, which one. What else do you know about that culture and its general attitudes about Muslims and Arabs? (I know that's stereotyping, but that's what your assignment is calling for.)
I reread the article and pyne doesn't state any identification with any particular oriental culture and about what i know muslims and arabs do you mean by example that the arabs are consider ethnics and muslims are more religious group. I really don't know what else to put