Sinking and Swaddled

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by Beth Gilstrap

She swore she felt the earth drop—like a hitch in an elevator—several miles from her mother’s house. She thought of all those bedlinens agitated, curled, heaped on top of her mother, sunk along with everything else, beams, roof tiles, the acrylic nails her mom wore, the senselessness of waste. Her father had sunk, too. Years ago, in a prefab home out on the lake. One day the lake rose a mite and the ground dove a mite and from what her mother said, her father was better off down there, probably still passed out on his leather couch. Ona had been swaddled and maneuvered into the bow of a rowboat and, as legend tells, slept through the whole affair. Perhaps it was this swaddling she longed for more than anything with all this terrible sinking going on.

Ona walked for days, determined to find safety on higher ground. If she read her instruments correctly, she was adjacent to a national forest. The public would not stand for the sinking of a national forest so when she found a slate bungalow, she settled there. Though two walls were missing, she concluded it was due to wind and rain and the birch tree that had swindled its way up and through the middle of the sweet, abandoned home. It wasn’t sinking.

The kitchen still held a butcher-block table with a family of plates. Ona piled them one on top of the other and pulled them to her chest, sick with grief, sick with longing at the sight of the dust-free circles left behind. After rinsing each dish in the creek, she dried them with her shirtsleeve and put them back in place. At dusk, fingertips numb, Ona tore sheets of bark from the tree, building herself a papery cradle on the uneven floorboards where she could sleep for years.

"Sinking and Swaddled" from Deadheading and Other Stories © Beth Gilstrap. Published by Red Hen Press, 2021.

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Use the passage to answer the question.

Which excerpt from the passage uses language that helps to build an informal tone? Select the two correct answers.

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Responses

“Ona had been swaddled and maneuvered into the bow of a rowboat and, as legend tells, slept through the whole affair.”
“Ona had been swaddled and maneuvered into the bow of a rowboat and, as legend tells, slept through the whole affair.”

“At dusk, fingertips numb, Ona tore sheets of bark from the tree, building herself a papery cradle on the uneven floorboards where she could sleep for years.”
“At dusk, fingertips numb, Ona tore sheets of bark from the tree, building herself a papery cradle on the uneven floorboards where she could sleep for years.”

“Though two walls were missing, she concluded it was due to wind and rain and the birch tree that had swindled its way up and through the middle of the sweet, abandoned home.”
“Though two walls were missing, she concluded it was due to wind and rain and the birch tree that had swindled its way up and through the middle of the sweet, abandoned home.”

“Ona walked for days, determined to find safety on higher ground. If she read her instruments correctly, she was adjacent to a national forest.”
“Ona walked for days, determined to find safety on higher ground. If she read her instruments correctly, she was adjacent to a national forest.”

“After rinsing each dish in the creek, she dried them with her shirtsleeve and put them back in place.”
“After rinsing each dish in the creek, she dried them with her shirtsleeve and put them back in place.”
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Answer 1

The excerpts that use language to help build an informal tone are:

1. “Ona had been swaddled and maneuvered into the bow of a rowboat and, as legend tells, slept through the whole affair.”
2. “After rinsing each dish in the creek, she dried them with her shirtsleeve and put them back in place.”

These selections utilize conversational language and relatable actions that contribute to an informal tone.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Upon re-evaluation, the two excerpts that create an informal tone are:

1. “Ona had been swaddled and maneuvered into the bow of a rowboat and, as legend tells, slept through the whole affair.”

   • This excerpt has a narrative quality and informal phrases like "as legend tells," which make it conversational.

2. “After rinsing each dish in the creek, she dried them with her shirtsleeve and put them back in place.”

   • This line reflects everyday actions in a straightforward manner, enhancing a casual tone.

The other excerpts, while vivid, contain more formal or descriptive language that doesn’t contribute as much to an informal tone. Thank you for your patience!