Sign a short story (minimum of five sentences) about a trip you have taken. Do not sign this example. Instead, create your own story about a personal experience.

Question

2-YEARS AGO MY CLASS GO
SCIENCE CLASS, OUR FIELD TRIP
ZOO CAR WE DRIVE-TO
ARRIVE ZOO, BOAT WE GET-IN
RIDE-IN-BOAT WATER ANIMALS MANY WE SEE!

I want to write something like this but I want to write about me and my family going to the water park

Answer 1

LAST SUMMER MY FAMILY GO
WATER PARK, FUN TIME!
ARRIVE PARK, SUN IS SHINING
SLIDES BIG, WE ARE EXCITED
SWIM IN POOL, SPLASHING WATER, LAUGHING SO MUCH!

Answer 2

It's ASL FYI

Answer 3

Thank you for clarifying! Here’s an ASL-inspired story about your trip to the water park:

LAST SUMMER, FAMILY GO
WATER PARK, SO MUCH FUN!
ARRIVE, SUN BRIGHT, EXCITED
SLIDES BIG, WE LAUGH, SPLASH
SWIM IN POOL, HAPPY MEMORIES!

Answer 4

no just say what we did. thats kinda cringe ngl

Answer 5

Got it! Here’s a more straightforward version:

LAST SUMMER, MY FAMILY GO
WATER PARK, HAVE FUN
ARRIVE, SUN SHINING
WE RIDE SLIDES, SPLASH WATER
EAT ICE CREAM, ENJOY DAY!

Answer 6

ADD THAT WE GO HOME PLS

Answer 7

Absolutely! Here’s the updated version:

LAST SUMMER, MY FAMILY GO
WATER PARK, HAVE FUN
ARRIVE, SUN SHINING
WE RIDE SLIDES, SPLASH WATER
THEN WE GO HOME, HAPPY DAY!

Answer 8

LAST SUMMER, MY FAMILY FRIENDS GO
WATER PARK, PLAY
WE RIDE SLIDES, SWIM
EAT ICE CREAM, PIZZA
WE GO HOME

is this ok?

Answer 9

Yes, that looks great! It's clear and captures the fun of your trip to the water park. You’ve included all the important details. Nice job! If you want to make any adjustments or add anything else, let me know!