Certainly! Here are examples of more wordy sentences versus clearer, more concise sentences:
Wordier:
The cake was made by Sarah for the party.
Clearer and Concise:
Sarah made the cake for the party.
Wordier:
The meeting was held by the team to discuss the project's progress.
Clearer and Concise:
The team met to discuss the project's progress.
Wordier:
The report was completed by John before the deadline.
Clearer and Concise:
John completed the report before the deadline.
Wordier:
The presentation will be presented by Tom tomorrow.
Clearer and Concise:
Tom will present the presentation tomorrow.
These examples illustrate how dropping unnecessary helping verbs and eliminating passive constructions can enhance clarity and conciseness.