It looks like you're referring to a specific passage and needing to analyze sentences within it for potential changes. To help with your questions, I’d need the actual passage or sentences you are mentioning. Please provide the text, and I'd be happy to assist you with identifying the needed changes!
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What change is needed in sentence 7? *
Change "As" to "Since"
Change the comma after "page" to a period
Insert a colon after "these"
Change excellence to excelence
What change is needed in sentence 4? *
Change "started" to "starting"
Change "identified" to "idintified"
Insert a comma after "values"
Delete the quotation marks after "Friday"
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