Be sure to read it aloud to yourself -- or better yet, have someone read it aloud to you!! You'll hear the errors and some funny stuff, too.
For example, in that first sentence -- was Joe "lubricated"? That should make you laugh ... and then realize that you need to change something. It's what's called a dangling modifier.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/modifiers.htm#danglers
Read it aloud; make your corrections; and then re-post. I'll check it over for you.
Rewrite the passage below correcting any errors of grammar and usage
The mechanic drove out the car to Joe that was lubricated. As a matter of fact, he has not done enough on it as Joe has expected. But whatever it was he decides to take it like that. The experience with the mechanic isn’t his first, neither will it be the last. Either the car or his mechanics, he believes has been unfaithful to he and his colleagues who have similar problem. Yesterday, for example, Amina her friend told to him that her friend Kwame is going to study auto engineer so that he can fix his own cars and as well get a degree who he has yearned for all his life. But to be successful in the ‘profession’ everything will depend on him studying well. Kwame only fear, Amina added is that she cannot speak good English and to complete a degree, at least Communication Skills must be passed.
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