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The Okefenokee is the biggest swamp in North America. Part of it was helped by Franklin Roosevelt when he took a bunch of it and made it into a wildlife refuge. Before that, people could take trees away. Now the swamp has loads of animals.
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The Okefenokee Swamp holds the distinction of being the largest swamp in North America. Its preservation and transformation into a wildlife refuge owe a debt of gratitude to the efforts of Franklin Roosevelt. Prior to this intervention, the swamp was subject to deforestation. However, as a result of these protective measures, the Okefenokee Swamp now thrives as a habitat rich in diverse animal species.