The segments are not clearly defined. In scenes where the friends are conversing, they seem to be sharing their thoughts about the situation, presented more as narration, before returning to the main story.
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There are no clear numbers of segments, the scenes where the friends are talking together, it’s like they are exchanging their thoughts amongst each other about the situation but as a narration and then go back to the main story
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