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I was only wearing all black and had colorful ribbons on my hair, but I hoped to be wearing a dress and have instances where I would carry a bag pack like when we went into the school but, that was a perfect scene to carry bag packs. Otherwise everything was beatiful and Ioved it

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I was dressed in all black and had colorful ribbons in my hair, but I wished I could wear a dress and have moments when I carried a backpack, like when we entered the school. It was the perfect setting for carrying backpacks. Otherwise, everything was beautiful, and I loved it.