Another moment that creates suspense is when the grandmother, after a heartfelt moment, suddenly doesn't recognize the narrator anymore. Her blank stare and lack of response make the narrator feel uneasy and helpless, emphasizing how fragile her condition is.
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Another event that built suspense is when the grandmother, after an emotional moment of connection, suddenly loses recognition of the narrator. Her blank stare and unresponsive behavior leave the narrator feeling unsettled and helpless, adding emotional tension and highlighting the fragile nature of her condition.
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