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In 2735 Loba, Lifeline, and Mad Maggie found Skudge in a bar on Salvo where he gave a warm welcome to Maggie however was dismissive of Lifeline and Loba viewing them as Syndicate scum and refused to give away any information about Torres Silva to them. Maggie stabbed three darts into Skudge's hand as a form of encouragement as he pleaded "Things have changed, Mags." To which Maggie retorted "Oh, but I ain't changed, Skudge." After being asked why he was scared by Lifeline he took the darts out from his hand and slammed them into a map behind him and told them "This will show you why..."
Maggie, Lifeline, and Loba went to the place Skudge marked which ended up being a hidden facility in the desert. After activating the Spectre security system and taking some important information the three escaped with the help of Valkyrie, with Loba taking a mysterious item without anyone's knowledge.
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Following Skudge's indication, Maggie, Lifeline, and Loba arrived at the location he marked, which turned out to be a concealed facility in the desert. After activating the Spectre security system and obtaining valuable information, the three managed to escape with the assistance of Valkyrie. Unbeknownst to the others, Loba discreetly took hold of a mysterious item.
Maggie, Lifeline, and Loba went to the place Skudge marked which ended up being a hidden facility in the desert. After activating the Spectre security system and taking some important information the three escaped with the help of Valkyrie, with Loba taking a mysterious item without anyone's knowledge.