Revise this weak thesis statement into a strong persuasive thesis statement:

"Homework is a topic people often discuss in schools."

(1 point)
Responses

"Some people think homework is bad."
"Some people think homework is bad."

"Homework can be challenging."
"Homework can be challenging."

"Schools should limit homework to improve students' mental health, encourage family time, and increase participation in extracurricular activities."
"Schools should limit homework to improve students' mental health, encourage family time, and increase participation in extracurricular activities."

"This essay will talk about homework."

1 answer

"Schools should limit homework to enhance students' mental health, foster stronger family connections, and promote greater involvement in extracurricular activities."