Revise the sentence below to make it more formal:
'You're going to get really fat if you eat at fast foods restaurants all the time.
My version:
If you continue eating at fast food restaurants all the time, the possibility of becoming obese will be very high.
Please check my work.
3 answers
It's wordy, but it is definitely more formal!
How would you rewrite the sentence.
I'd just write this: You will become obese if you continue eating fast food.