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Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to him using a hands-free headset.

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Enrico had to work from home while taking care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, where Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker, Paul. While helping his son on the playground slide, Enrico talked to Paul using a hands-free headset.