revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively.
Original
1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain.
Revised.
The chain of student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system
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What is a "chain of student cafeteria"?
A chain of student cafeteria sounds wrong.
Revised..
The student cafeteria is operated by a chain of college food service system.
Did I put the modifier to the right place?
Revised..
The student cafeteria is operated by a chain of college food service system.
Did I put the modifier to the right place?
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