Overall Score: 18/20
Comments:
- Good job on including at least three print and digital sources in your research and presentation portfolio.
- Your details and facts mostly accentuate the main ideas and support the claim, with mostly accurate facts.
- Technology was used successfully to present and create the research project, and eye contact was present throughout the presentation.
- Ideas were mostly in a logical order.
- You mostly identified and used strategies for punctuation, capitalization, and spelling when writing a summary.
Suggestions for improvement:
- Try to ensure all facts are accurate and directly support the main ideas.
- Make sure all ideas are related and in a clear logical order.
- Work on consistently identifying and using strategies for punctuation, capitalization, and spelling when writing a summary.
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Use the rubric to make a story
Once upon a time, in a small village nestled at the foot of a majestic mountain, there lived a young girl named Lily. Lily was known for her insatiable curiosity and love for adventure. One day, while exploring the woods near her home, she stumbled upon an ancient scroll hidden within a hollow tree.
Excitedly, Lily unrolled the scroll, revealing a map marked with mysterious symbols and intricate drawings. Determined to uncover the secrets of the map, Lily embarked on a thrilling journey to find the hidden treasure it promised.
Armed with courage and a sense of wonder, Lily traversed through dense forests, crossed roaring rivers, and climbed treacherous cliffs. Along the way, she encountered helpful forest creatures, wise elders, and magical beings who guided her on her quest.
As Lily delved deeper into the heart of the mountain, she faced challenges that tested her resolve and ingenuity. With each obstacle she overcame, she grew stronger and more determined to reach the treasure that awaited her at the summit.
Finally, after a grueling ascent, Lily reached the peak of the mountain, where a shimmering chest lay waiting for her. With trembling hands, she opened the chest to reveal not gold or jewels, but a mirror that reflected her own image, radiating with a newfound sense of self-discovery and inner strength.
As Lily gazed into the mirror, she realized that the true treasure she had sought all along was not material wealth, but the courage, resilience, and wisdom she had gained on her extraordinary journey. And so, with a heart full of gratitude and joy, Lily returned to her village, ready to inspire others with her tale of adventure and self-discovery.
And thus, the story of Lily and the Mountain Treasure became a beloved legend in the village, inspiring generations to embrace their curiosity, face their fears, and embark on their own journeys of discovery and growth.
Excitedly, Lily unrolled the scroll, revealing a map marked with mysterious symbols and intricate drawings. Determined to uncover the secrets of the map, Lily embarked on a thrilling journey to find the hidden treasure it promised.
Armed with courage and a sense of wonder, Lily traversed through dense forests, crossed roaring rivers, and climbed treacherous cliffs. Along the way, she encountered helpful forest creatures, wise elders, and magical beings who guided her on her quest.
As Lily delved deeper into the heart of the mountain, she faced challenges that tested her resolve and ingenuity. With each obstacle she overcame, she grew stronger and more determined to reach the treasure that awaited her at the summit.
Finally, after a grueling ascent, Lily reached the peak of the mountain, where a shimmering chest lay waiting for her. With trembling hands, she opened the chest to reveal not gold or jewels, but a mirror that reflected her own image, radiating with a newfound sense of self-discovery and inner strength.
As Lily gazed into the mirror, she realized that the true treasure she had sought all along was not material wealth, but the courage, resilience, and wisdom she had gained on her extraordinary journey. And so, with a heart full of gratitude and joy, Lily returned to her village, ready to inspire others with her tale of adventure and self-discovery.
And thus, the story of Lily and the Mountain Treasure became a beloved legend in the village, inspiring generations to embrace their curiosity, face their fears, and embark on their own journeys of discovery and growth.
Make it about friends making mobile suits
In a bustling city where technological innovations thrive, a group of friends, Alex, Mia, and Jake, shared a passion for engineering and a love for mecha anime. Inspired by their favorite series, they dreamed of creating their own mobile suits that would bring their imaginations to life.
With each of their unique skills and talents, Alex, a brilliant programmer, Mia, a skilled mechanic, and Jake, a creative designer, they set out to turn their dreams into reality. Together, they spent countless hours in Alex's garage, tinkering and building, fueled by their shared enthusiasm and determination.
Alex, with his expertise in coding, worked tirelessly on developing the mobile suit's operating system, ensuring smooth and precise control. Mia, using her mechanical prowess, meticulously crafted the intricate parts and mechanisms that would make the mobile suits functional and efficient. Jake, with his artistic flair, designed the sleek and futuristic exteriors that would give their creations a distinct and impressive look.
As the days turned into weeks, their mobile suits began to take shape, each one reflecting the personality and style of its creator. Alex's suit was agile and versatile, Mia's suit was sturdy and powerful, and Jake's suit was sleek and elegant. Together, they formed a formidable team, ready to pilot their creations and embark on epic adventures.
Finally, after months of hard work and dedication, the friends unveiled their completed mobile suits to the world. With a sense of wonder and excitement, they climbed into their respective cockpits, feeling a rush of adrenaline as they powered up their machines for the first time.
As they took to the skies, soaring through the city and testing the limits of their creations, they felt a sense of camaraderie and unity unlike anything they had ever experienced. With each maneuver and battle simulation, they honed their skills and bonded as a team, proving that friendship, creativity, and determination could truly conquer any challenge.
And so, as the sun set on the city skyline, the friends piloted their mobile suits into the horizon, ready to take on whatever adventures awaited them, knowing that as long as they had each other, there was nothing they couldn't achieve. And thus, the legend of the friends and their mobile suits became a symbol of friendship, teamwork, and the limitless possibilities that come with chasing your dreams.
With each of their unique skills and talents, Alex, a brilliant programmer, Mia, a skilled mechanic, and Jake, a creative designer, they set out to turn their dreams into reality. Together, they spent countless hours in Alex's garage, tinkering and building, fueled by their shared enthusiasm and determination.
Alex, with his expertise in coding, worked tirelessly on developing the mobile suit's operating system, ensuring smooth and precise control. Mia, using her mechanical prowess, meticulously crafted the intricate parts and mechanisms that would make the mobile suits functional and efficient. Jake, with his artistic flair, designed the sleek and futuristic exteriors that would give their creations a distinct and impressive look.
As the days turned into weeks, their mobile suits began to take shape, each one reflecting the personality and style of its creator. Alex's suit was agile and versatile, Mia's suit was sturdy and powerful, and Jake's suit was sleek and elegant. Together, they formed a formidable team, ready to pilot their creations and embark on epic adventures.
Finally, after months of hard work and dedication, the friends unveiled their completed mobile suits to the world. With a sense of wonder and excitement, they climbed into their respective cockpits, feeling a rush of adrenaline as they powered up their machines for the first time.
As they took to the skies, soaring through the city and testing the limits of their creations, they felt a sense of camaraderie and unity unlike anything they had ever experienced. With each maneuver and battle simulation, they honed their skills and bonded as a team, proving that friendship, creativity, and determination could truly conquer any challenge.
And so, as the sun set on the city skyline, the friends piloted their mobile suits into the horizon, ready to take on whatever adventures awaited them, knowing that as long as they had each other, there was nothing they couldn't achieve. And thus, the legend of the friends and their mobile suits became a symbol of friendship, teamwork, and the limitless possibilities that come with chasing your dreams.
Shorten it
In a city filled with innovation, friends Alex, Mia, and Jake shared a dream of building mobile suits inspired by their favorite anime. With Alex coding the operating system, Mia crafting the mechanics, and Jake designing the exteriors, the trio worked tirelessly in Alex's garage. Their mobile suits, each reflecting their unique skills, were finally complete. As they piloted their creations through the city, they bonded as a team, proving that friendship and determination could conquer any challenge. Together, they soared into the horizon, ready for new adventures, knowing that with each other, they could achieve anything. The legend of the friends and their mobile suits became a symbol of friendship, teamwork, and the power of chasing dreams.
Make it a little longer
In the bustling city of TechnoCity, where technological innovations were at the forefront of society, a group of three friends - Alex, Mia, and Jake - shared a deep passion for engineering and a love for mecha anime. Inspired by their favorite series, they often spent hours discussing and dreaming about creating their own mobile suits that would bring their imagination to life.
Each friend brought their unique skills and talents to the table. Alex, a brilliant programmer, was tasked with developing the intricate operating systems that would control the mobile suits. Mia, a skilled mechanic, focused on crafting the robust and efficient mechanical parts that would make the mobile suits functional. Jake, a creative designer, poured his artistic talents into creating the visually appealing and futuristic exteriors that would set their creations apart.
Together, the trio transformed Alex's garage into a makeshift workshop, where they spent countless nights working tirelessly on their project. The hum of machinery and the glow of computer screens filled the air as they soldered, coded, and assembled their mobile suits piece by piece. Each friend brought their expertise to the table, collaborating seamlessly to bring their vision to life.
As weeks turned into months, their mobile suits began to take shape - each one a reflection of its creator's personality and skills. Alex's suit was nimble and agile, Mia's was robust and powerful, and Jake's was sleek and visually stunning. The friends marveled at what they had accomplished together, their friendship growing stronger with each challenge they overcame.
Finally, after months of hard work and dedication, the friends unveiled their completed mobile suits to the world. With a sense of anticipation and excitement, they climbed into their respective cockpits, feeling a rush of adrenaline as they powered up their machines for the first time.
As they took their maiden flight through the city skyline, the friends experienced a sense of exhilaration and unity like never before. Maneuvering their mobile suits through the urban landscape, they tested the limits of their creations and honed their piloting skills. Through teamwork and determination, they conquered every obstacle that came their way, proving that together, they were capable of achieving the extraordinary.
As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow over TechnoCity, the friends piloted their mobile suits into the twilight, ready to embark on new adventures and face whatever challenges awaited them. The legend of Alex, Mia, and Jake and their remarkable mobile suits became a symbol of friendship, teamwork, and the limitless possibilities that came with chasing one's dreams in a world where creativity and innovation knew no bounds.
Each friend brought their unique skills and talents to the table. Alex, a brilliant programmer, was tasked with developing the intricate operating systems that would control the mobile suits. Mia, a skilled mechanic, focused on crafting the robust and efficient mechanical parts that would make the mobile suits functional. Jake, a creative designer, poured his artistic talents into creating the visually appealing and futuristic exteriors that would set their creations apart.
Together, the trio transformed Alex's garage into a makeshift workshop, where they spent countless nights working tirelessly on their project. The hum of machinery and the glow of computer screens filled the air as they soldered, coded, and assembled their mobile suits piece by piece. Each friend brought their expertise to the table, collaborating seamlessly to bring their vision to life.
As weeks turned into months, their mobile suits began to take shape - each one a reflection of its creator's personality and skills. Alex's suit was nimble and agile, Mia's was robust and powerful, and Jake's was sleek and visually stunning. The friends marveled at what they had accomplished together, their friendship growing stronger with each challenge they overcame.
Finally, after months of hard work and dedication, the friends unveiled their completed mobile suits to the world. With a sense of anticipation and excitement, they climbed into their respective cockpits, feeling a rush of adrenaline as they powered up their machines for the first time.
As they took their maiden flight through the city skyline, the friends experienced a sense of exhilaration and unity like never before. Maneuvering their mobile suits through the urban landscape, they tested the limits of their creations and honed their piloting skills. Through teamwork and determination, they conquered every obstacle that came their way, proving that together, they were capable of achieving the extraordinary.
As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow over TechnoCity, the friends piloted their mobile suits into the twilight, ready to embark on new adventures and face whatever challenges awaited them. The legend of Alex, Mia, and Jake and their remarkable mobile suits became a symbol of friendship, teamwork, and the limitless possibilities that came with chasing one's dreams in a world where creativity and innovation knew no bounds.
Shorten it by 1 paragraph
In the bustling city of TechnoCity, three friends - Alex, Mia, and Jake - shared a passion for engineering and mecha anime. Inspired by their favorite series, they worked tirelessly in Alex's garage to create their own mobile suits. Each friend contributed their unique skills, with Alex programming the operating systems, Mia crafting the mechanics, and Jake designing the exteriors. Their mobile suits, a reflection of their collaborative efforts, were finally complete. As they piloted their creations through the city, the friends bonded over their shared dream, proving that friendship and determination could conquer any challenge. Together, they soared into the horizon, ready for new adventures, embodying the power of teamwork and chasing dreams.
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