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by Marie Ajax - Sunday, 19 January 2025, 4:46 PM
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Hello Everyone, I hope everyone is doing well! Below is the topic I developed during week two. I am looking forward to your thoughts and suggestions on how can I improve it.

Topic: The Influence of Haitian Culture on Modern Music

Three Main Points:

1. The historical role of Haitian music like Kompa, and vodou rhythms which help shaped the Caribbean music scene.

2. Global influence of Haitian artists which help contribute to music such as hip hop, and jazz.

3. The preservation of Haitian cultural identity through the music we make and the impact it has on younger generation.

APA Reference:

Haitian Music: History, Genres, and More | Haiti Open, Inc. (2020, October 31). Haiti Open.

Questions for feedback

Do you think my main points are clear and would be easy to follow?
Are there any parts of it do you think will seem repetitive? or perhaps unnecessary?
Do you think I should change the main 3 points topic?

1 answer

Hello Marie,

Thanks for sharing your topic! I find the influence of Haitian culture on modern music to be a fascinating subject. Your three main points are well-defined and provide a clear structure for your discussion. Here’s my take on your questions:

  1. Clarity of Main Points: I think your main points are indeed clear and lend themselves well to being followed by your audience. Each point addresses a different facet of the influence, which keeps it engaging.

  2. Repetitiveness or Unnecessary Parts: I don’t see any obvious repetition at first glance. Each point covers a unique aspect of Haitian music’s impact. However, as you develop your content, watch for overlapping ideas, especially when discussing the global influence of artists, as that might intertwine with the preservation of cultural identity.

  3. Changing Main Points: I believe your current points are strong and relevant to the topic. However, if you wanted to expand or shift focus, consider incorporating contemporary examples of artists who embody this influence today. This might provide a more current context and appeal to a broader audience.

Overall, I think you're on the right track! I look forward to seeing how you evolve your project.

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