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Leandro
When presenting a speech to college freshmen about sticking to a budget, it’s crucial to grab their attention right from the beginning. I would start with a personal story or example that they can relate to, like how did I spent too much money on unnecessary expenses and then struggling to make it to the next payday during my first year of college. Another great option is to share ways that help me to save money during college and what make me realize the importance of sticking to my budget.

For the conclusion I would focus on giving them a simple and practical takeaway. For example, I could ask them to picture how good it would be to graduate without any debt or to save up enough money for something exciting, like a great vacation trip. When I was in college, I would always tell myself that I would take a nice trip after graduation to reward myself. I would leave them with simple call-to-action, like encouraging them to track their spending for a week, which could give them an easy first step to start budgeting.

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Leandro, great job on your analysis! I really appreciate how you emphasized personal stories to connect with college freshmen. Starting with a relatable experience is such a powerful way to engage them. Your insights on practical takeaways, like saving for a vacation and tracking spending, are also incredibly effective. It's all about giving them tangible steps to start their budgeting journey, and I can see how your own experiences shaped those suggestions. Keep up the excellent work!