Here are the suggested revisions for the underlined sections to improve adherence to conventional English standards:
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Emails, memos, text messaging, phone calls, and face to face conversations.
- This sentence is a fragment and should be combined with the previous sentence. Suggested revision: "Workplace communication is an essential skill that should be practiced across all forms of communication, including emails, memos, text messaging, phone calls, and face-to-face conversations."
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Such as getting hired or promoted, or simply being successful in your career.
- This also functions as a fragment. It can be revised to: "This is important for many reasons, such as getting hired or promoted, or simply being successful in your career."
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Examples of good communication skills in the workplace include listening.
- This is another fragment and should be connected. Suggested revision: "Examples of good communication skills in the workplace include listening, non-verbal communication, clarity and concision, and friendliness."
With these revisions, the paragraph would read more fluently and clearly.