To make this conclusion better, the writer should add "an interesting final thought or question." This would encourage further reflection on the topic and leave the reader with something to ponder. For example, the writer could conclude with a thought about the balance between preserving traditional culture and embracing modern influences, or pose a question about the future of Ethiopian culture amid globalization.
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Ethiopia’s culture is rooted in the old ways, but it also has been changed by outside influences, too. The main religion in Ethiopia is the Christian faith, for instance, which was brought there by Europeans. The most common meal is wat served with injera, and many people still wear wraparound-style clothing, such as the sash and the netela. However, in the major cities, the people of Ethiopia tend to dress in more Western-style clothes, and other Western ideas have also crept in, such as the popular sport of football
What should the writer add to make this conclusion better?
an interesting final thought or question
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transition words and phrases
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