Read the sentence.
The hot chocolate was a nice treat today.
Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?
Today was very cold, so the hot chocolate tasted extra yummy.
The hot chocolate tasted good because it was warm and the day was cold.
The steaming mug of rich hot chocolate was a soothing treat on this snowy day.
On very cold days, a big mug of hot chocolate is an excellent treat.
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The steaming mug of rich hot chocolate was a soothing treat on this snowy day.
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