Read the personal narrative passages and select the best answers. You must score 3/5 points to pass.

Question

1) Decide if the above sentence requires revision or if it is correct as is.
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1 point
D. Lindsay, was six
A. NO CHANGE
B. Lindsay, is six,
C. Lindsay was six

2) If the phrase "at first" were deleted from the preceding sentence, the paragraph would primarily lose ___.
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1 point
A. An idea of Lindsay's early years in school.
B. An indication that the sibling's relationship would change.
C. A cue to the narrator's early feelings about her sister.
D. Nothing of significance as the phrase adds no pertinent information to the sentence.

3) Decide if the corresponding sentence above requires revision or if it is correct as is.
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1 point
A. NO CHANGE
B. As, I got older
C. As I, got older
D. As I got older;

4) Decide if the corresponding sentence above requires revision or is correct as is.
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1 point
A. NO CHANGE
B. to be an intrusion upon
C. to interrupt
D. to intrude

5) Decide if the above sentence requires revision or is correct as is.
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1 point
A. NO CHANGE
B. To her I was a nuisance, to me she was an idol.
C. To her, I was a nuisance - to me, she was an idol.
D. To her, I was a nuisance; to me, she was an idol.

Answer 1

Here are the best answers for each of the questions based on the provided passages:

1. Decide if the above sentence requires revision or if it is correct as is.

• C. Lindsay was six

2. If the phrase "at first" were deleted from the preceding sentence, the paragraph would primarily lose ___.

• B. An indication that the sibling's relationship would change.

3. Decide if the corresponding sentence above requires revision or if it is correct as is.

• A. NO CHANGE

4. Decide if the corresponding sentence above requires revision or is correct as is.

• D. to intrude

5. Decide if the above sentence requires revision or is correct as is.

• C. To her, I was a nuisance - to me, she was an idol.

Your choices will depend on the context of the passages you're analyzing, but based on grammatical correctness and clarity, the answers provided should be solid. Good luck!