Read the paragraph. Choose two sentences and rewrite them to show sensory details.

Answer 1

Original paragraph: The sun was shining brightly in the clear blue sky and a cool breeze rustled the leaves in the trees.

Rewritten with sensory details: The sun beat down on my skin, warming me from head to toe. I could feel the cool breeze brushing against my face, carrying with it the earthy scent of the rustling leaves in the trees.