The student's text is not considered plagiarized, but it does closely resemble the source material. Here are some key points to consider:
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Paraphrasing: The student has rephrased the original sentence from the source, changing "Anyone who has experienced firsthand the overwhelming power of the life-sized painted bulls and horses" to "If you've seen the ancient paintings." While the essence of the idea is maintained, the language and structure have been altered.
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Originality: Although the student text captures the main idea of the original source, it does not use the exact wording, which is a sign of paraphrasing. However, it may still be viewed as too similar to the original text without a citation.
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Attribution: The student text does not provide a citation or reference to Jared Diamond's work. To avoid plagiarism, it would be essential for the student to either properly cite the source or significantly distill the information further into their own original writing.
In summary, while the student's text is not verbatim from the source, it lacks proper attribution, which is critical for avoiding plagiarism. The best practice would be to include a citation or credit the source when using the ideas, even if phrased differently.