Read the following excerpt from a student report written for a biology course. Which of the following should the student change in order to better suit the audience and purpose of the essay?
include more vivid sensory details
remove overly biased language
limit repetition of the word “eels”
clearer description of eel habitats
1 answer
The student should change the repetition of the word "eels" in order to better suit the audience and purpose of the essay.