The problem that needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative is that in sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun. The correct pronoun is "I" instead of "myself." Therefore, the corrected sentence should read: "Every day, I walk to school with them." Additionally, "Everyday" should be changed to "Every day" to indicate the frequency of the action, but the main issue is the use of the incorrect pronoun.
Read the first sentences in Dorthea’s personal narrative.
1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother and sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them.
What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative?
Dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative.
The pronoun “they” should be replaced with the pronoun “we.”
In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.
The word “Everyday” should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3.
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