The excerpt highlights the remarkable nature of honeybees, emphasizing their global presence, social structure, and unique characteristics such as their rapid wing beats. It also raises environmental concerns, particularly the impact of climate change on bee populations.
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"Honeybees are some of the most amazing animals on our planet. They live in colonies and can be found all over the world (Blackiston, p. 13). The reason they sound as if they are buzzing is that their wings beat approximately 11,000 times per minute (Pestworldforkids.org, 2018). Honeybees are our only source of honey; however, climate change is causing declines in bee populations (Soroye, Newbold, and Kerr, 2020)."
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