C. by removing the commentary that the professor is most likely involved in the gambling ring.
Read the excerpt from a newspaper article.
Last night, Fairview police arrested six university
students for involvement in an illegal gambling ring.
Today, community leaders and university officials are
claiming that Professor Shuman, the students"
academic advisor, should also be arrested. Dr. Harris,
the department chairperson, reports that Schuman has
recently started holding group tutoring sessions in his
campus office in the evenings. Video footage from
security cameras outside the campus building shows
him exiting on several occasions with some of the
accused students. Although Shuman denies the
gambling ring allegations, he was most likely involved
with this illegal activity.
How should this excerpt be edited to make it more
objective?
A. by including direct quotations from the professor
about his knowledge of the gambling ring.
B. by interviewing the department chairman and the
professor to get both sides of the story.
C. by removing the commentary that the professor is
most likely involved in the gambling ring.
D. by deleting the department chairman's and
professor's names from the article.
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